Submitted for Haibun Thinking Week 5


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This week is film week and were are provided with a movie quote and photograph to choose between for our prompt.


“Don’t forget – I’m just a girl, standing in front of a boy,
asking him to love her.”

– Notting Hill

Credit: Arthur Browne

Credit: Arthur Browne

Michael never acted before in his life.  No church pageants, no elementary school show and certainly never in high school.  It was senior year and frankly his last change to connect with the girl he liked since the sixth grade.  If he didn’t take a chance now, it just may be his last chance ever.  Today was the last day to audition for Romeo and Juliet, the high school’s spring play and Michael stood in the wings waiting for his turn.

“Why am I here.  I must be crazy,” said Michael.

“She will be Juliet so that is why you are here,” said Ken.  Ken wasn’t auditioning but showed up to encourage his best friend.

“Michael Pointer you’re turn,” said the director.  He couldn’t see her because of the stage lights.

He will try new things

Bank his fears, connect with her

Her face set his goal

Outside the school, Candace walked to the student parking lot with her friend Maria.

“Do you want to go shopping for prom gowns on Saturday?” said Maria.

“I’ll come with you but since no one has asked me to the prom, there is no reason for me to shop,” said Candace.

“Someone will soon.  How did your audition go anyway?”

“Pretty well.  Being on the stage is the one thing I am confident about.  Having a date for the prom, not so confident.”


I am not just a pretty face

Look beyond, know me

On Friday, Candace and Maria read the audition results posted on the stage door.

“Who is Michael Pointer?” said Maria.

“I know him.  We’ve been in the same school since kindergarten,” answered Candace.

“Well whoever he is, he’s your Romeo.”

Fate takes center stage

Just a girl and just a boy

Destiny is their script


4 responses

  1. Lovely tale of expectation I did like your flowing haikus, very well done indeed.


  2. Al says:

    That is truly awesome. I like the way you used colour with your haikus to give them more meaning and perspective. Also the unexpected meeting. Brilliant.