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Here is my fourth submission for The Wall


The shifting of platonic plates in the earth’s core caused of the explosion.  Before Hamis and Camilla could get away, the ground beneath their feet split and they were caught in a mudslide.   They survived but when they cleared the mud from their eyes, they saw that a large portion of the wall had crumbled.

“We need to tell the elders.  Our people are taught to fear the world beyond the wall, but we never learned what to fear,” shouted Hamis.

“R-U-N………  Something is coming and I think it is whatever makes that loud screech we always hear,” screamed Camilla.



3 responses

  1. EagleAye says:

    Holy smokes! Did Jadir shift the tectonic plates? If he did, he’s hella powerful now.


  2. draliman says:

    Uh oh, and down comes the wall. I think EagleAye is right, it must have been superman Jadir.