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Here is my third submission for The Wall


“Switch me back?” gasped Jadir.

“Just imagine and it will be.”

Jadir thought of his svelte body and handsome face.  Opening his eyes, Eliya was standing before him again.

“What good is this power against what we face out there?”

“I can show you skills with these weapons and you will kill creatures as my people have for many years but there will always be more to fight.  Now that you are among us, we stand a chance for the very first time.”

“I still don’t understand.  What can switching with another human do?”

“You won’t be switching with a human.”


9 responses

  1. Danny James says:

    Great follow up MaryAnn. Wonderful! Let’s see what happens now.



  2. Swoosieque says:

    I love the suspense!


  3. kerrieanns says:

    Oh brilliant! I sense a big fight scene coming up 😀


  4. EagleAye says:

    Oh, my goodness! That’s a serious twist in the end. I like it! Eliya outlined for him exactly what I was hoping for. Now we just got to get him there.


  5. Joe Owens says:

    Eliya has got the best intentions for jadir in mind right? We are just taking her word that she is on the level. What if she is evil and co-opting Jadir’s powers for her own design?


  6. draliman says:

    Great stuff! Now he can meet the creatures beak to beak, claw to claw.