Have you ever taken part in a writing chain?
Kerrie Salsac has created a novel writing challenge. Head over to her place to take a look. You can see all the rules there too.
Here is my first submission for The Wall
Jadir kept running but tripped several times. He didn’t know where to go and the forest was dense with only the moon to provide him with light. Understandably, there were no torches on top of the wall as the light would attract unwanted wildlife such as the creature now chasing him. Managing to outrun the Terror Bird, Jadir stopped to take a drink from a rambling brook. The water was cool, so Jadir splashed some on his face. Just as he cupped his hands to scoop more water, an Orthacanthus, an eel-like fresh-water shark snapped at his hand drawing blood.
Now I can see why the wall was there. I think he definitely would have been safer in bed lol
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I was thinking of the movie the Village until the prehistoric bird showed up.
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Yeah that’s what I thought 🙂 Amazing how things change
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Woopsie. Sorry folks. I could have gone along with that too.
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No sorry needed. This is a new story, not a Village rewrite. Sorry if it sounded like I was complaining
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Could have, but that’s the beauty of this game! It takes us all by surprise as me move through plot twists no one anticipated 😀
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Yikers. Somebody else did some research as well. That’s a cool fish, although I’m hoping it’s not poisonous.If not, maybe it’s good eating?
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Don’t know. I just looked up prehistoric fresh water fish and found it. If it is poisonous, he’ll be a gonna and we don’t have any other characters.
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Maybe best that it isn’t then. I think we need to add in some bad guys. Al will get disappointed if I don’t kill bunches of them.
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Hey, that’s a point. We need more characters so we can start the killin’ 🙂
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Maybe he find’s another walled community or others hiding out in a cave.
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This isn’t his lucky day is it? 😉
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No it isn’t. I think since it is a prehistoric work, even the plants may be deadly.
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I’m loving the research put into this story! These creatures are deadly!
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I won’t be putting my hands into unknown streams from now on. 🙂
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