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Here is my third submission for He’s Behind You
An hour ago, Horatio smirked as he watched two employees fighting his creatures. R&D occupied the top floor of Executive Campus I in the corporation’s two building campus. As R&D Director, Horatio designed the creatures. From his corner office, he watched Executive Campus II for signs of those fools and answered his cellphone.
“Wasn’t the fight with my creatures an amazing site?”
Listening…..
“Tony was uncooperative. After he saw the invoices, elimination was necessary.”
Listening……
“I had no option. Nothing can be permitted to stop us.”
Listening…..
Ending the call, Horatio grabbed his Sig Sauer and stepped onto the elevator.
Ooh, he’s going after somebody, but who? I love the suspense in this. And now we know who created the creatures. Thanks for adding that in.
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Ohhhh.Who is on the other end of the line?
DJ
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Alright, another baddie! And a mystery about who exactly is on the other line… Excellent add-on!
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Thanks. I figure either the chairman of the board or an outside faction such as terrorists that want his creatures for ill means.
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We have a Hornblower. Sorry, couldn’t resist (Horatio Hornblower) Or he will get them in a half Nelson hehe. Sorry again 😉
Seriously though, I like that the R&D people are as evil as they normally are. Excellent
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I thought of him too. Great series if books and television movies. I chose an obscure name so that I didn’t get into the two Sam’s mistake like previously.
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Haha yes 🙂 Plus of we go along the lines of being a dislikable dude, he matches Horatio Caine from CSI Miami 😉
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A baddie plus an unknown uber-baddie!
I’m hoping Horatio gets ripped apart by his own creations.
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