Kerrie Salsac has created a novel writing challenge. Head over to her place to take a look.  You can see all the rules there too.

Well I went to sleep on the east coast the United States awaiting my turn for another episode but it wasn’t moving beyond  6.  I wake up this morning and we are up to 14.  I love these international collaborations.  Below is my 2nd contribution.

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With no time to worry about what he had done, Dennis grabbed Trixie, flung her over his shoulder and exited the alley.  Spotting motorcycles parked outside a bar, Dennis couldn’t believe the keys were left on one of the Harleys.  Dennis had a different lifestyle in his 20s, so he didn’t hesitate.

“Trixie put on this helmet and climb on the back,” ordered Dennis.

“Are you crazy.  This is the Stone Pony.  Do you know who uses this bar as the headquarters for their territory?” warned Trixie.

“I don’t care.  I see this opportunity and I’m taking it,” argued Dennis.

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17 responses

  1. Al says:

    Yikes. Stone Ponies may not be as forgiving as Jorge 😉

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  2. draliman says:

    This is starting to remind me of “The Blues Brothers”, near the end when everybody was chasing them 🙂

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  3. EagleAye says:

    Ohmigosh, Cops, Motorcycle gangs, and rogue NSA agents. If only the video rental guy were after him now. Seems Dennis has a dangerous history. I hope he can handle all these folks coming after him! Great addition!

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  4. Good twist to had more action to the story.

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  5. JackieP says:

    bikers! Oh oh. That is not a good idea to get on the bad side of.

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  6. Joe Owens says:

    Dennis in not about to wilt at this moment. Every husband should be so devoted.

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  7. kerrieanns says:

    Poor Trixie is getting thrown about alot isn’t she haha

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