Kerrie Salsac has created a novel writing challenge. Head over to her place to take a look.  The rules allow three entries as long as they are separated by at least two entries by others.  Here is my third and final but I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story.  IMPORTANT:  THIS POST HAS BEEN CHANGED TO 22 BECAUSE ANOTHER BLOGGER POSTED AT THE SAME TIME.  GO BACK AND READ NO. 22 IN THE LINKS FIRST AND THEN READ THIS ONE IN THE LINK FOR 21.


Cindy continued to demand answers to her questions.  After an hour, Mac drove down a gravel road to a brick house hidden from view.  The women were escorted into the house and placed in the care of two Agents.

“I am Agent Kacie Jones and my partner is William Kent.  Does everyone understand English and is anyone in need of medical attention?” Receiving no indications otherwise, Agent Jones continued, “I know that you are scared.  Your safety is our top priority.”

At breakfast we’ll introduce you to the agents who will keep you safe during the day,” added Agent Kent.


11 responses

  1. J. Milburn says:

    I like how you kept the mystery of who exactly gave the orders to save her and about her parents. I’m seeing a traitor among the day shift in the future 😉 Great continuation!


  2. kerrieanns says:

    I cannot change the order they appear on the InLinkz, but I changed your title on there to say 22. I hope that helps the navigation.
    I thought something like this might happen :-/
    thanks for thinking so quick on your feet and changing your entry 😀


  3. EagleAye says:

    I like Agent Jones already. She seems like a sharp professional. It’s good they’re in a safehouse, but how long will that work for them?


  4. I was thinking they must be tired and hungry. Nice bridge to the next installment.


  5. draliman says:

    At last they’re safe. Or are they (dum dum DUM)?