alley

Copyright: Kent Bonham

The Door in the Alley

“The plan is to go downtown after school,” said Kim.

“What did you tell your mom?“ asked Willa.

“My mom won’t be home so I didn’t have to tell her anything,“ said Kim.

Later the girls arrived at the top of the alley steps and Willa spotted a door at the end where kids their age were entering.  Catching the door before it shut, Kim and Willa raced through.  Afterwards, anyone nearby could have seen the door for just a brief second but then it disappeared.  A sign on the door had read

TIME TRAVEL EXPERIMENTS

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Submitted for Friday Fictioneers.  This is a fun writing prompt challenge.  Rochelle supplies a photograph to guide your writing and the word limit is 100.  Give it a try.

friday-fictioneers

NaBloPoMo November 2013

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16 responses

  1. Dear Maryann,

    Wonder where in time the door led them. All I can think of are the distraught parents these kids leave behind. Nice one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. Sandra says:

    Very Potteresque… nice one.

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  3. Great! I love time travel and I wish I could find that door!

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  4. This is a nice take on the prompt, darling — like the beginning of a new Narnia book or something.

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  5. elmowrites says:

    Intriguing. I think your Question mark wandered in the second line…

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  6. Maryann, maybe a riff on a modern day Pied Piper? Not sure I want to be at the other end where all the teens are! 🙂

    janet

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  7. atrm61 says:

    Oh how scary!Kids love the idea of going where their parents would not like them to-sigh!Hope they will return safely.A wonderful take:-)

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